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Dawn_Nexus
Dawn_NexusLv31yr
2023-08-06 15:40

I like that how smooth was the starting and how it went in flow with the other character. I'll slap this with my 5 Stars!!.

Traveling in anime worlds as Crimson Abyss

Yuri_lover12
4.5
68 Chs

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Yuri_lover12
Yuri_lover12Author

I don't see any fan-fiction of alpha. so was trying to write one. I will try to make the novel good but don't be excepted to good In just few chapters as I said I'm new to writing. I will get better as write (probably) 😅

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LittleBaron
LittleBaronLv11

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Spelloyal
SpelloyalLv12

It's an interesting fic that I recommend reading, but it has its problems. The writing could be better and the affection system ruins what little romance this fic has. It would be better to simply remove this system or replace it with one that shows the waifu's emotional state (basically make the MC an empath for waifus). The biggest problem with this fic is that the first world is highschool of the dead and the author is really trying hard to create a plot and eventually conclude the story of this world, the problem with this is that it was never an Anime about plot but about breasts, so complicating things too much and taking too long in this world ends up making the arc boring.

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Rakshahsa
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Review Update Previous rating 3* now 4,4 as of chapter 15 the author it making his sentences clearer to the point and overall fixed the previous problems i have seen before. to get the 5 starts from me just need to get more chapters with the quality good job i have seen major improvments already from the first chapter

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The_Dark_Hydrax
The_Dark_HydraxLv4

Please post more chapters, maybe just 2 or even 3 chapters a week pretty please

1yr
Zaychic
ZaychicLv2

I really like this fan fiction, well-developed characters and worlds on, I've already read it 4 times and it still doesn't bother me, I can read it a few more times and it still won't bother. It was nice to find such a wonderful job, I hope you will not abandon it and continue to please your readers p.s . I am looking forward to a new chapter :) (English is not my native language, I apologize for mistakes )

1yr
USS_NEW_JERSEY
USS_NEW_JERSEYLv4

ok i love this and it fun keep up the good work and if you wanna continue why not use the world like overlord RWBY arknights etc (just an idea no need to take it this story is yours)

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The_Dark_Hydrax
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