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_VIIX_
_VIIX_Lv121yr
2023-07-26 19:52

Expected the Honoured One but got The Walmart one. Title's deceiving, It Should be: In Chainsaw Man with Gojo Satoru's APPEARANCE. You aren't getting the Strongest Jujutsu Sorcerer. You're getting a weak Shounen MC with tragic past on his way to fulfil the "weak-to-strong" title. How successful will he become and how long will it take? Well, idk... you find that out by reading it. Writing Quality(4/5): Pretty decent. Some occasional grammatical/spelling mistakes but that's too rare tbh. could work on the narrative flow but pretty okay by webnovel standard. Story development (4/5) . Character Design(2/5): Coz I Don't really like it.I hate nerfs. And this is nerfing at its finest. Author could claim Gojo would be too OP in Chainsawman but meh. I came here just to see that but now you tell me that some day he MIGHT reach a fraction of Gojo Satoru's strength. I don't like to be deceived. Updating Stability(5/5): I honestly don't know the schedule since I binge read this. But imma give 5/5 just because. World background(4/5): Still in early phases, That's why I'm not explaining this or the Story development.

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Jack_Anarchy
Jack_AnarchyLv3

So irs basically what I hate, average Joe with powers and appearence, that means he is dumb

TRUCKSAMAA
TRUCKSAMAALv3

please tell me there is romance

Honoured_Writer
Honoured_WriterLv4

From where I read up to, No.

TRUCKSAMAA:please tell me there is romance
Sosynovsky
SosynovskyLv1

So you expected op from the start or what? It would kill all plot, no intrigue no personal growth, the only thing left to increase word count would be opening harem. Bruh. Mc becomes stronger with each chapter, right now he recovered all his powers expect domain. Honestly, author just made mc into exact copy of gojo, expect small differences. Which is not bad, cause we get mc with wider world view and more interesting goals.

_VIIX_
_VIIX_Lv12

I think I made it perfectly clear what I expected when going into the story. I expected an OP MC. And this was anything but. Now you could trash my taste with your superior logical reasonings describing how much of a moron I am for not having the same taste as you. But in the end it is what it is. This review was done around 20 chapter release mark iirc. And aside from name, the MC was nowhere closer to Gojo Satoru level. So meh. Your argument is decent but not like people can't pull off an OP MC.

Sosynovsky:So you expected op from the start or what? It would kill all plot, no intrigue no personal growth, the only thing left to increase word count would be opening harem. Bruh. Mc becomes stronger with each chapter, right now he recovered all his powers expect domain. Honestly, author just made mc into exact copy of gojo, expect small differences. Which is not bad, cause we get mc with wider world view and more interesting goals.
Sosynovsky
SosynovskyLv1

Perfectly clear, but with Gojos power level it’s impossible for plot to survive 30ch. Nobody thrashes your taste, I am just saying that what you expected can’t exist. 20ch were all about fighting, I doubt that you could grasp anything about mc behavior, counting that mc slowly improves his character.

_VIIX_:I think I made it perfectly clear what I expected when going into the story. I expected an OP MC. And this was anything but. Now you could trash my taste with your superior logical reasonings describing how much of a moron I am for not having the same taste as you. But in the end it is what it is. This review was done around 20 chapter release mark iirc. And aside from name, the MC was nowhere closer to Gojo Satoru level. So meh. Your argument is decent but not like people can't pull off an OP MC.
Sosynovsky
SosynovskyLv1

Also look at the title, it’s clearly written reborn AS gojo satoru

_VIIX_:I think I made it perfectly clear what I expected when going into the story. I expected an OP MC. And this was anything but. Now you could trash my taste with your superior logical reasonings describing how much of a moron I am for not having the same taste as you. But in the end it is what it is. This review was done around 20 chapter release mark iirc. And aside from name, the MC was nowhere closer to Gojo Satoru level. So meh. Your argument is decent but not like people can't pull off an OP MC.
_VIIX_
_VIIX_Lv12

True, all I could grasp in those chapters that he had arrogance rivaling Gojo's if not more with strength that could not hope to back it up. In the review I made it clear about what bias I had. The title was Click-bait(ish) for me. If that bothers you so much, then I'm certainly not stopping you from having a different opinion than mine. That aside, we'll just have to agree to disagree on what can or can not exist, as there are multiple fics, even originals that thrive while having a super powered MC from the very start.

Sosynovsky:Perfectly clear, but with Gojos power level it’s impossible for plot to survive 30ch. Nobody thrashes your taste, I am just saying that what you expected can’t exist. 20ch were all about fighting, I doubt that you could grasp anything about mc behavior, counting that mc slowly improves his character.
_VIIX_
_VIIX_Lv12

And had he been even half powerful as Gojo at his age, all those fights arc would've taken half the chapters. He was weak af. You say that he's Gojo Satoru now. I don't believe you tbh, but I can not really argue against it either as I haven't read it, and don't have any ground to make further claims. If it's true then, great for everyone ig. It's a story with good progression, but it's hardly about "The Strongest" that I expected to see.

Sosynovsky:Also look at the title, it’s clearly written reborn AS gojo satoru
Sosynovsky
SosynovskyLv1

Let’s be concrete, world is chainsaw man, it’s world with low power ceiling . Gojo with his space manipulation and ability to perceive/manipulate energies is invisible. There is no worthy enemies, which would reduce plot to slice of life. All originals with “strong mc from the start” have high power ceiling, so it’s different. Would be nice to get recommendation on fiks with op mc and real plot(not slice of life or waifu collection as main plot), it’s been long since I found a good one.

_VIIX_:True, all I could grasp in those chapters that he had arrogance rivaling Gojo's if not more with strength that could not hope to back it up. In the review I made it clear about what bias I had. The title was Click-bait(ish) for me. If that bothers you so much, then I'm certainly not stopping you from having a different opinion than mine. That aside, we'll just have to agree to disagree on what can or can not exist, as there are multiple fics, even originals that thrive while having a super powered MC from the very start.
Lifeisnotdaijobu
LifeisnotdaijobuLv13

So bro got the skins without the actual skills? Oof

Len_Stoff
Len_StoffLv1

In the end he became a slave to makima, mc cuckold

Honoured_Writer:From where I read up to, No.
David_555
David_555Author

Yo my guy, how does falling in love make you a cuckold?

Len_Stoff:In the end he became a slave to makima, mc cuckold
Bijou_Shneider
Bijou_ShneiderLv2

Dit you forget about the ff limit breaker mythologie ?

ELPERROX
ELPERROXLv1

Broooo sigue con la historia no le pares a las críticas,critican como si ellos fuera perfectos y seguro no tiene ni una historia buena se la pasan puro criticando cuando ellos ni quisieran le llega a los talones a tu historia bro sigue así y ojalá subas otro capítulo pronto

David_555:Yo my guy, how does falling in love make you a cuckold?
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