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David_555
David_555Author1yr
2023-07-20 03:48

First of all, the grammar isnt all that good, and chapters are very short. Also the story lacks depth and the backstory isnt all that great. Aside that, the fighting scenes are good, the mc isnt overpowered right off the bat and makes the effort. All in all, I think the author can do better.

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Bijou_Shneider
Bijou_ShneiderLv1

when are you going to post chap 14 of limit breaker mythology

Bijou_Shneider
Bijou_ShneiderLv1

will you post the ff limit breaker mythology chap 14 today

Sovannra_Seang
Sovannra_SeangLv11

Tsubasa1
Tsubasa1Lv5

Bryanjay_Zero
Bryanjay_ZeroLv12

thanks for write this fanfic bro[img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]

FallenAngeI
FallenAngeILv13

Romance?

redninja_gaming
redninja_gamingLv3

what this an author genuinely criticizing his own work? it's good that your working on getting better but don't beat yourself down too much

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