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Davint
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2023-11-10 21:52

i really enjoy reading this as the story is very unique and well written. Author manages to find balance between a slice of life type story with battles and adventures here and there such that it is very enjoyable to read. The technical details and world background might be lacking when compared to other fics like Pokemon AU Adventures or Master of Tactics but overall it is still very good. Chapter lengths are superb and there are no info dumps. Power scaling are also logical and the constant twist and turns keeps me intrigued. A very reccomended read.

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BenisBoy14
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I really liked Master of Tactics too, but the technical stuff doesn't fit into my vision for the fic. It works perfect for a solo-adventure (pun intended), but it takes too much time away from character development.

Davint
DavintLv14

I get it that the other two fics utilization of super in-depth technicalities translates to a whole different writing style and story direction. Your current style and pacing is already superb but I was just thinking that since solo is going to hunt for badges I thought that maybe getting a little technical might spice things up down the line. Thanks for replying though, I really like the fact that you didn't start in kanto like most others.

BenisBoy14:I really liked Master of Tactics too, but the technical stuff doesn't fit into my vision for the fic. It works perfect for a solo-adventure (pun intended), but it takes too much time away from character development.
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