Review for Chapter 100 By Author Crown_Nyx: It's been quite a journey; in less than a month, I've written over 100 chapters. I want to thank you all for the support you've offered, which has motivated me to keep going. For new readers, I hope you'll give it a try. The first few chapters might not make much sense initially, but they are important. As you progress, you might come across a few minor mistakes, but I've been quick to react and edit them as soon as they're spotted. Enough about that, what can you expect from this story? Here's a list: 1) A main character who is realistic, along with well-developed side characters. 2) Strong female characters who aren't just accessories. 3) One love interest, but with a hidden plot. 4) Massive plots that interconnect like puzzle pieces in later chapters. 5) The system plays a minimal role—it doesn't force anyone to do anything and treats all members of this new world equally. 6) No forced plot, boring young masters, or arrogant individuals. A lot of thought and ideas have gone into the story, with the system playing a minor role. Every character is important, each with their own struggles and reasons to live and survive. You can use this review for [Question & Answers]. I will do my best to reply as soon as possible. That's all, and I wish you a good day.

After following the story for a while, this is an updated review(I am not good at giving reviews) At the start, I was going to lower my rating because some things were pretty slow paced, but then once the plot came together, I got amazed and hooked. I just think that other readers who are used to other novels with x kill x will find it too much realistic... Another thing is the system, like the author stated does nothing apart from offering everyone an equal chance to grow stronger, it's up to them to take it or lose it. Like I said earlier the only negative I find is the slow pace but I got over it by now, I can't wait to see the new system you mentioned in latest chapter!

Lucius! I think I like him😏His personality got me on😁well nice book you've earned yourself a real fan here😅😎[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

I love Lily personality it reminds me of Xena the Warrior Princess, would like to know why she attacked him at the start? Also the city they are in seems mysterius looking forward for the future ! Great chapters!

I'm about to start reading I'm just glad the MC isn't 1-16 years old

An interesting story. We follow Lucius's adventure in a new and somewhat fair world. The novel gives off the vibes of ORV at the start with how things started. All in all, I think you should give it a try.

[NOTE: This reviewer only read up to 10 chapters of this story] I just want to say that I really like the premise of your story and that your way of writing is very detailed. Your storytelling reminds me of the books I used to read and not mere web novel! However, some might not agree that this is a good thing. Some words utilized are far too complex that it might hinder the readers from fully understanding the story, because well, they don't even know the words! Second, the first and second chapter was info-dumping a bit. Third, some paragraphs are HUGE! Consider trimming them down for mobile readers. That's all my comments for now. Good job on this work and I hope you keep this up!

Finished so far with "Chapter 5". The concept is good and the story isn't flat, there's a sense of direction. I like the way the author describes her characters, it's really well done. If I have to give this story one flaw, it's that it doesn't have many chapters. Author go free as well!!😂😂

Just five chapters so far but I can already see the potential of this book. I like the fresh idea of "Fair world" and how people in this world will function. I don't really can give an honest review because there's little chapters but we'll see... more chapter author!