Review for Chapter 100 By Author Crown_Nyx: It's been quite a journey; in less than a month, I've written over 100 chapters. I want to thank you all for the support you've offered, which has motivated me to keep going. For new readers, I hope you'll give it a try. The first few chapters might not make much sense initially, but they are important. As you progress, you might come across a few minor mistakes, but I've been quick to react and edit them as soon as they're spotted. Enough about that, what can you expect from this story? Here's a list: 1) A main character who is realistic, along with well-developed side characters. 2) Strong female characters who aren't just accessories. 3) One love interest, but with a hidden plot. 4) Massive plots that interconnect like puzzle pieces in later chapters. 5) The system plays a minimal role—it doesn't force anyone to do anything and treats all members of this new world equally. 6) No forced plot, boring young masters, or arrogant individuals. A lot of thought and ideas have gone into the story, with the system playing a minor role. Every character is important, each with their own struggles and reasons to live and survive. You can use this review for [Question & Answers]. I will do my best to reply as soon as possible. That's all, and I wish you a good day.
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LIKEMy advice is to pay close attention and don't forget anything. This author actually remembers everything they've written and ties things together perfectly. The hints of the plot is always there but easy to miss and overlook and then when you notice them you'll be like oh wow how didn't I see that coming before it happened lol it's exciting. I feel generally challenged to think outside of the box for predictions. Absolutely love the story so far 😁.
Thanks, Neith! :) Glad you're enjoying it!
I didn't drop my other novel, I'm just working and don't have time to upload chapters for both of them at the moment. That's why I didn't go premium on it yet, allowing readers to read it for free. On WorldShift people pay so I keep it updated without stopping. Once I have time, I will continue my other one, approximately next month.
It’s puzzling why there’s still debate over whether this will turn into a harem. With the introduction heavily skewed towards female characters, it’s clear trouble looms for those averse to harem novels. While a story tagged as such provides clarity, in scenarios like this where females outnumber males, the narrative could be vexing for non-harem enthusiasts. The protagonist will inevitably have ambiguous relationships with these ladies, even the landlady isn’t exempt, my simple advice is don't read it if you don't like Harem novels😏
Hi, author here. First of all thanks for showing interest. Secondly, don't buy the chapters because of hiatus. You will be left on a cliff hanger and as a reader I know how much it sucks . About the book.. Maybe I will rework it i future as it was my first book and some things after experience I would like to write differently. At the moment my time is spend on real life while working on a traditional historical fiction that I wish to release as a paperback book.
Thanks for letting us know. Gl with your new book.