Item: Worldshift A New Beginning.
Rating: 4.8
Author: AtaraxiaNous

AtaraxiaNousLv121yr

2023-10-08 15:12

After following the story for a while, this is an updated review(I am not good at giving reviews) At the start, I was going to lower my rating because some things were pretty slow paced, but then once the plot came together, I got amazed and hooked. I just think that other readers who are used to other novels with x kill x will find it too much realistic... Another thing is the system, like the author stated does nothing apart from offering everyone an equal chance to grow stronger, it's up to them to take it or lose it. Like I said earlier the only negative I find is the slow pace but I got over it by now, I can't wait to see the new system you mentioned in latest chapter!

Worldshift A New Beginning.

Crown_Nyx

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288 Chs

Liked by 5 people

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Crown_NyxAuthor

Thanks for the review, I know the story is slow paced its my fault trying to write a lot of details and give a picture to the readers, I will try improve thanks![img=recommend]

1yr

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Review for Chapter 100 By Author Crown_Nyx: It's been quite a journey; in less than a month, I've written over 100 chapters. I want to thank you all for the support you've offered, which has motivated me to keep going. For new readers, I hope you'll give it a try. The first few chapters might not make much sense initially, but they are important. As you progress, you might come across a few minor mistakes, but I've been quick to react and edit them as soon as they're spotted. Enough about that, what can you expect from this story? Here's a list: 1) A main character who is realistic, along with well-developed side characters. 2) Strong female characters who aren't just accessories. 3) One love interest, but with a hidden plot. 4) Massive plots that interconnect like puzzle pieces in later chapters. 5) The system plays a minimal role—it doesn't force anyone to do anything and treats all members of this new world equally. 6) No forced plot, boring young masters, or arrogant individuals. A lot of thought and ideas have gone into the story, with the system playing a minor role. Every character is important, each with their own struggles and reasons to live and survive. You can use this review for [Question & Answers]. I will do my best to reply as soon as possible. That's all, and I wish you a good day.

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