Definitely needs an editor. it's hard to read when every sentence has an error or two, it really breaks you out of the immersion. I think the idea is cool, but very poorly executed. it reads like a synopsis, which is disappointing. The characters are pretty poorly written, most acting very out of character or not developed in the slightest. Given a quick info dump on who they are, isn't development. You might as well slap an OC in there, call her ino, and have her say nothing but exposition, and it would still be a more developed character than what you've got.
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The typos he can fix pretty easily with AI, idk bout the rest tho
AI makes everything so much worse tbh. Anybody who touches it for any sort of art form loses my respect. Don't cover up your incompetence with something heavily flawed, that's just asking for a mess of a story.
Obvs dont have the AI write it, just copy paste the text and have it highlight or fix the typos
As a concept it’s fun, just throw what you want to happen in the input and it helps develop your idea and covers the annoying details. Then you can get on with developing the story more and being creative. In practice it tries to suck the soul out of your writing and you end up taking more time correcting than you would have if you just wrote out the entire thing yourself. I like the idea but for now it’s still just an interesting idea, even when stories just use gpt a little bit it puts me off the story. I REALLY dislike the way gpt writes for some reason…
