It feels slightly childish with the swearing being a bit weirdly added but it seems like potential. Honestly most harem fics are sort of braindead on the romance part so I'll just not mind that and give a review later on when the story gets better.
StarGate
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LIKECelleborn:This fic have 17 reviews and yours is the only real one, and for that aI tip my hat for you. (Imagine a gif of a cowboy giving that nod)