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2023-10-11 19:15

É importante trabalhar na melhoria da escrita, mas o enredo é interessante. O autor tem potencial, embora a escrita precise de ajustes. Há elogios ao conceito da história, que envolve mulheres empoderadas e resistência à colonização. A escrita é vista como um ponto de desenvolvimento, e sugere-se uma adaptação ao formato de WebNovel. No geral, o feedback é construtivo e incentiva o autor a continuar buscando melhorias.

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