When I read the synopsis, I was immediately drawn in because I like the concept of empowered women, and my country was also colonized by Western empires so the idea of fighting back against our oppressors intrigued me. However, for the writing itself, it needs a lot of improvement. I agree with the previous reviewer that your writing style is similar to a script rather than a novel. Are you perhaps into theater/radio play more than novel writing? If so, I understand because I started there as well. However, to adapt to WebNovel, you need to adjust your writing style. If you want a specific reference to what is a good story and writing style, I suggest you read WebNovel Blazuku's works (specifically Primal Hero). You can learn a lot from their work! Overall, the concept is amazing but the implementation needs a lot of work for improvement. But no worries, all of us had to start somewhere! Please continue writing with the intention of improvement!
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