Just gotta work on that writing, The plot seems interesting. Author, Please do some checks and possibly use Grammarly. But the novel does seem like it has potential. I wish you all the best.

É importante trabalhar na melhoria da escrita, mas o enredo é interessante. O autor tem potencial, embora a escrita precise de ajustes. Há elogios ao conceito da história, que envolve mulheres empoderadas e resistência à colonização. A escrita é vista como um ponto de desenvolvimento, e sugere-se uma adaptação ao formato de WebNovel. No geral, o feedback é construtivo e incentiva o autor a continuar buscando melhorias.

This is an interesting concept and I have never read anything like this before. The writing quality needs a bit of improvement but I believe that the author and the story have great potential and the author will improve for sure. I would also like to request the author to update on a schedule.

Very nice story and concept but the writing can use some work and sometimes it’s hard to understand what’s going on but the concept is amazing and the emotions feel real. Everything is 5 stars but the writing quality is 3 stars

This is a nice book, too bad it is completed already

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It is quite an interesting read, it's different from what's out there, I'd really recommend this book to be read, keep up the good work author

When I read the synopsis, I was immediately drawn in because I like the concept of empowered women, and my country was also colonized by Western empires so the idea of fighting back against our oppressors intrigued me. However, for the writing itself, it needs a lot of improvement. I agree with the previous reviewer that your writing style is similar to a script rather than a novel. Are you perhaps into theater/radio play more than novel writing? If so, I understand because I started there as well. However, to adapt to WebNovel, you need to adjust your writing style. If you want a specific reference to what is a good story and writing style, I suggest you read WebNovel Blazuku's works (specifically Primal Hero). You can learn a lot from their work! Overall, the concept is amazing but the implementation needs a lot of work for improvement. But no worries, all of us had to start somewhere! Please continue writing with the intention of improvement!

I’m sorry to say this but this novel need a lot of improvement. the storytelling and narrative format should be change. You could take a look on other novel for an example. You also need to check grammar properly there are a lot of mistake in the story. You should also write more detail on the story. Currently, it look ike reading a movie script rather than novel However, don’t give up, your writing skill will get better soon!