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MARLENE_ANGEL
MARLENE_ANGELLv110mth
2024-03-16 20:54

The big problem with this novel Yuna is so perfect she has no flaws and never fails. the author never fixes Yuna Fathead's ego. Yuna is perfect and everyone is a loser. that the plot of the novel.

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MARLENE_ANGEL
MARLENE_ANGELLv1

cmon even God's mistakes..cmon it's no wonder Bleach's novel was dumb in the end because Miss Perfect never fails..cmon she masters Ichigo's power better than Ichigo ..the universe has different laws but Yuna gets them right why? plot armor.,, why did Yuna in the universe bleach Yuna became human with no power but no she became a soul reaper what is the change?.. WHY IS KARMA HIT YUNA HARD

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B6_12nn3
B6_12nn3Lv1

Man just shut up! Stop meat riding the author and slapping every critique with a "write your own story", it's a review section for a reason the review guy wasn't even disrespectful just giving a genuine review.

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florian_lautenbach
florian_lautenbachLv15

she is over 8000 years old Power from 3 worlds.......yes everone else is a loser this is the joke of the Story! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

A_Stupid_Story
A_Stupid_StoryLv2

Sullivan_Nya
Sullivan_NyaLv12

She said she should be older than the 8th digit aka at least more 10,000,000 years old which is a hell of a lot older 8,000

florian_lautenbach:she is over 8000 years old Power from 3 worlds.......yes everone else is a loser this is the joke of the Story! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
nobe_soen_1
nobe_soen_1Lv2

doesn't that make her a pedo

Sullivan_Nya:She said she should be older than the 8th digit aka at least more 10,000,000 years old which is a hell of a lot older 8,000
Sullivan_Nya
Sullivan_NyaLv12

She has never once in the stories preyed on a child.

nobe_soen_1:doesn't that make her a pedo
ChaosLegion555
ChaosLegion555Lv13

To be a little more accurate, it was said in the first book that she is over a million years old. Not to mention the shear size of her harem at the time honestly after that long and with the kind of size her harem is I wouldn't be surprised if she knew the abilities and powers in different world because one of her lovers had it or similar ones. Hell, even the otsotsuke clan from Naruto were descendants of one of her lovers' families.

florian_lautenbach:she is over 8000 years old Power from 3 worlds.......yes everone else is a loser this is the joke of the Story! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
ChaosLegion555
ChaosLegion555Lv13

Personally, I have no problem with what you're calling an issue if you remember she a millions year old supreme being with a harem that would put some historical rulers to shame in shear size. anything that she hasn't learn in that timeframe by herself may have been taught to her by one of her lovers just saying.

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