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This book is well thought out and well written. It's hard to follow at first, but the character's perspective in between worlds she lives in contrasts with her daily experience. All I can conclude is that this story has good potential! I give this work a 5/5 rating because I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for introducing me to this work of art!
Half me and half...
Inemin
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Your work is fine but it is in my part about the confusion thing. No need to make extra efforts to make readers like me understand. I'll read your work again and add this story to my library. That way I can read your work from time to time. I'll tell you my feedback in the comments section.
Inemin:Yes, that. There seems to be some confusion because of the prologue, where the story is presented from the POV of a key character, which is meant to present the world in which things will happen. I'm considering adding an explanatory note. Thank you very much.
iIt's about the switching perspective of the Mc. It gets clearer as I progress to the later chapters.
Inemin:Thank you for taking the time to read and review. ❤️ ❤️ I hope you'll keep enjoying it and keep it in your library. I would also be interested to know what parts you found confusing or hard to follow.