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J_a_zzy
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2023-07-26 02:55

Shameful author here:- I wrote it so obviously I am gonna give it five stars and hope you will too, also if you find any mistakes or have some doubt do comment them in chapters or paragraph comments I read them all. Even if you don't find any mistakes or don't have some doubts make sure to give feedback I need to know what readers are likes and do not like in my work. Thanks for reading my novel.

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Daoist_Culture
Daoist_CultureLv15

Hello. Is there any kind of yuri here? I hate that stuff and would like to know before reading. thanks

J_a_zzy
J_a_zzyAuthor

If you don't like threesomes with two girls and one boy then yeah it's Yuri otherwise no, there will be no girl-to-girl romance or lemons without MC's presence in the scene.

Daoist_Culture:Hello. Is there any kind of yuri here? I hate that stuff and would like to know before reading. thanks
Daoist_Culture
Daoist_CultureLv15

I like 3 soms, but not if his girls kiss/touch/eff each other.

J_a_zzy:If you don't like threesomes with two girls and one boy then yeah it's Yuri otherwise no, there will be no girl-to-girl romance or lemons without MC's presence in the scene.
DaoistatnnJf
DaoistatnnJfLv13

the mc pays a h0e to kiss his 'booty call' while he sits by the side with a "satisfied" smile, fklng waste of time reading this.

Daoist_Culture:I like 3 soms, but not if his girls kiss/touch/eff each other.
Daoist_Culture
Daoist_CultureLv15

Wow not even 50 chaps and heavy yuri already. Looks like i made a good choice to not start it. Thanks for the info fellow daoist. Thats not culture at all.

DaoistatnnJf:the mc pays a h0e to kiss his 'booty call' while he sits by the side with a "satisfied" smile, fklng waste of time reading this.
mulaabana
mulaabanaLv2

what does mean? explain in simple language.

DaoistatnnJf:the mc pays a h0e to kiss his 'booty call' while he sits by the side with a "satisfied" smile, fklng waste of time reading this.
loidentity
loidentityLv15

What exactly changed the MC into a complete psychopath? It is honestly extremely weird he is just going out of his way to torture women in like every sexual encounter just out of nowhere. Is that how the entire novel will be? Or did I miss something?

manish_tiwari_3119
manish_tiwari_3119Lv14

What happens to Sia? I would not like if she gets the cultivation technique. It’s not good for the MC to be too stupid. That would make the story worse.

shinu316
shinu316Lv14

Totally agree with u

loidentity:What exactly changed the MC into a complete psychopath? It is honestly extremely weird he is just going out of his way to torture women in like every sexual encounter just out of nowhere. Is that how the entire novel will be? Or did I miss something?
SeidMix
SeidMixLv13

harem size?

King_soul
King_soulLv15

Tf is wrong with MC? Is he gonna change? I feel like he has no respect for women! And also has very trashy personality! I really liked novel in start but now MC just gives me creeps!

King_soul
King_soulLv15

I agree 🤢🤮

manish_tiwari_3119:What happens to Sia? I would not like if she gets the cultivation technique. It’s not good for the MC to be too stupid. That would make the story worse.
Vince_Gregorie
Vince_GregorieLv4

is this ntr? I hope not.

Rona_Vera_lac
Rona_Vera_lacLv1

Can you tell me what the MC's personality is like and if there is an NTR?

daoist566y9n
daoist566y9nLv13

discord link expired. give us new link

Juto
JutoLv14

I have no problem with that. I never understood why so many people do not like female-on-female actions of their own woman. I mean, if you supposedly love them but do not trust them enough, why be with them? And if you're just with them for the pleasure, what's the problem?

J_a_zzy:If you don't like threesomes with two girls and one boy then yeah it's Yuri otherwise no, there will be no girl-to-girl romance or lemons without MC's presence in the scene.
DRACO55
DRACO55Lv3

Because we are Completely Straight Men..it is as simple as that..i can make this comment much longer to explain more clearly but it would not matter much because most who will read this comment would get my point from just first line..and I am happy that i didn't read this novel much longer than needed to understand it.. because after observing and reading a little..i can guess that with what kind of women he would make out and later how it would evolve.....

Juto:I have no problem with that. I never understood why so many people do not like female-on-female actions of their own woman. I mean, if you supposedly love them but do not trust them enough, why be with them? And if you're just with them for the pleasure, what's the problem?
Fjdjjfjsjiwos
FjdjjfjsjiwosLv3

I completely agree with you, not a single lemon scene with 2 or more girls is complete without yuri, absolutely all of them have it, and quite intensely, and often mc simply forces the girls to do it.

DRACO55:Because we are Completely Straight Men..it is as simple as that..i can make this comment much longer to explain more clearly but it would not matter much because most who will read this comment would get my point from just first line..and I am happy that i didn't read this novel much longer than needed to understand it.. because after observing and reading a little..i can guess that with what kind of women he would make out and later how it would evolve.....
Tapu_ke_Papa
Tapu_ke_PapaLv4

whats the discord ?????

Blank_Maniac
Blank_ManiacLv12

when are you going to update again

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