Writing Quality(3 star)- It's readable, and there are only a few grammar mistakes. I would have given it a four star but sometimes, the author gives very long info dumps that isn't necessary and his descriptions really can't make you visualize well because it's has little descriptions. I also don't like the fact that he uses Shadow Spiderman instead of Spider Noir, which I'm sure he received comments about but the fact he didn't change it shows his laziness.Story Development(2 star)- I personally didn't like the development, the fact he revealed that all of them are just media in his world and the fact that even though he is an OC, he's barely contributing to the plot. It's something I personally don't like. Character Design(2 star): Since this is a fanfic, the character design should have been pretty high but the way the author writes the character feels one dimensional, so I made it lower. Plus, I don't really like the MC. I don't have problems with weak, cowardly, edgy, overpowered, or cool protagonists, what I do care about though is a bland and uninteresting character. That's what this MC is, he's very bland, his personality is not explored, we don't even know his motivations that much. Update Stability(Five Star): Uploads everydayWorld background(Five star): This is a fanfic, so I think it's perfect. Though the world itself in this fanfic isn't explored that much.
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thanks for warning me 馃檹
World isn't explored very much so it deserves 5 stars . Makes perfect sense.
El mundo no se explora mucho, pero sabes todo lo que necesitas saber, pues es un fanfic, y por lo tanto, tienes varias pel铆culas para explorar el mundo por tu cuenta.
Dissapointed_One:World isn't explored very much so it deserves 5 stars . Makes perfect sense.
Braian_Rodriguez:El mundo no se explora mucho, pero sabes todo lo que necesitas saber, pues es un fanfic, y por lo tanto, tienes varias pel铆culas para explorar el mundo por tu cuenta.
so a normal fan fic with the oc just is watching the plot basically so basically the author is just copying pasting the plot of the show or movie without adding any new nuances of interest a pretty normal fanfic
