The grammar isn’t horrible but the way the story is written makes it seem weird and unnatural as if it was a translation from a chinese fanfiction, One of the things i didn’t like was how weak the main character was both physically and personality wise.
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its a translation 漫威蜘蛛侠：从平行宇宙开始
Thanks, it's no wonder it's so slow and plot conveniences are beginning to appear. The translator must be very good so far if everything noticeably different from Chinese fanfic. To the point of doubting whether it is inspired or not. Unfortunately, in the current chapter, notorious plot conveniences are beginning to emerge. As without having any contact with Norman Osborne, he literally dreams of the green goblin that the protagonist had faced in another universe. Just because. They will probably give an explanation but... What is the green goblin for in the story? The protagonist went to Andrew's universe to do tests and prevent Gwen Stacy from dying. All for a test, because he is even trying to get the guy to kill his enemies with the cheap excuse of the fandom. If he kills the villain, they don't get out of jail anymore and they don't kill people. Practically telling him to take responsibility for killing the villains, that he will have the responsibility for the people they kill, when the responsibility lies with poorly built prisons or the government that, no matter how many massacres they do, does not give him the death penalty or something like that . They are fans who want to blame the hero for not taking that justice into his own hands, when they literally forget that the police don't do anything to the villains when they have it. Imagine a criminal who practically kills 100 or 200 people while people try to stop him. I doubt that this guy lives or is not subjected to the electric chair. In the event that they give him a life sentence, if he escapes 3 or 4 times from jail and kills that or a larger number of people, people will demand his death for fear that he will get out again. And the government will succumb to the claim of the people or someone will order to kill the thief with an assassin. Simple as that.
