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R0BLv21yr
2023-07-18 15:37

I hate the fact that it's au, but overall I liked it. It's an average fanfic tho. ........................................ ........................................

In Naruto World with Perfect Control

Logical_Dot
3.1
93 Chs

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PriamusTheBright
PriamusTheBrightLv13

It feels like I’m reading a Chinese cultivation novel sorry not for me

1yr

SLappY
SLappYLv2

misleading tags. its just another Naruto turned into a Chinese cultivation novel for no reason. the writing quality is nice though and so is the update rate, so there's that at least

1yr
OldFellow
OldFellowLv14

Interesting start and an intriguing premise, though you broke the initial promisse already at chapter 2, it is not a fic on Naruto wolrd but a fic in an AU Naruto world, this discovery broke my immersion and unfortunately took my will to keep reading. You should update the summary and make it clear it is an AU, anyway good luck on the story

1yr
malinizgeldii
malinizgeldiiLv1

you can believe she turned the chakra into "qi" and practices xuallian (she was able to turn on her wise mode 2 weeks after she regained her memory) actually I don't have much problem with that but when hinata was 6 she acted like a nasty teenager of 14 years old. Read it if you can stand these two reasons.

1yr
Miracle_invoker_
Miracle_invoker_Lv3

C’était écrit par un chinois en infiltration ou je rêve ? Ça envoie des vibes de roman chinois de cultivation. La discussion entre Tsunade et le Mc se sentait irréel 100% Quitter le village est encore plus dur que d’y entrer et pourtant il a réussi à le faire avec hinata à la traîne. L’histoire progresse trop rapidement aussi

1yr
Koopatroopa4560
Koopatroopa4560Lv14

Ong, I can't even find the strength to continue reading this.

1yr
HereForGoodRead
HereForGoodReadLv4

Chapter 17 end of story thats when I just couldn’t even bother with trying

1yr
This_Young_Lord
This_Young_LordLv14

Alright... I'm out. This isn't my cup of tea. Stopped at Chapter 11 though. Read at your own discretion

1yr
Calintz20
Calintz20Lv7

The Novel feels like a bad Chinese machine translation; with glaring grammar mistakes. Furthermore, while it's set in an Alternate/Augmented Universe; I don’t feel the Author has a good grasp of the Naruto Universe as a whole.

1yr
DuchessKolslaw
DuchessKolslawLv11

Reveal spoiler

1yr
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