Item: In Naruto World with Perfect Control
Rating: 1.6
Author: DuchessKolslaw

DuchessKolslawLv111yr

2023-09-24 07:59

Made it like 11 chapters but it just feels wrong. The concept of Hinata being forced into the branch is pretty cool but everything else is just wrong. It's way to chinese cultivation novel like. Already master senjutsu at the age of 10 all under the guise of perfect chakra control and even created Tsunades forehead seal to store senjutsu chakra and not yin chakra. Everything screams "I'm a Chinese reincarnator/transmigrator so no matter what I do I will succeed everyone else is a background character with less IQ than normal"

In Naruto World with Perfect Control

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