One of the best stories I have read so far. The quality easily scales up to some bestlellers like LOTR. I am just a little confused why the author would write a fanfiction when he could just as easily create an original story of his own with that skill.
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LIKEits one of the best I have read so far, plus vering away from how we expect the story to go was really epic and subtle, never expected it but it wasnt abrupt. You started with a little character switch here and there and then boom it all fell into place. at this point I don't know what to expect if he will kill his brother or join him. I just didn't like the beginning,too abstract almost didn't want to read thought the entire book was going to be like that and I would need to think deep in order to understand. love the 3rd person reference hopefully he will eventually see himself as just one being instead of two separate entity in one vessel.
The writing is not bad but its not my cup of tea.There are paragraps that can be skipped and maybe whole chapters because of overdetail. LOTR s a book not a fanfit and doesnt over detail useless stuff like how the sub looks like. ButI can see hs talent and I’ll test my patience to contine this.