Simply excellent, both in terms of the concept and execution. The writing style, the depictions or differing characters thoughts and emotions, and the overall tone of the story are all woven with high competence. The MC’s perspective is written brilliantly and the disconnect he has with the people around him is wonderful and I hope remains consistent until the MC has children or something. The only flaw I can point to that prevents this from being up there with the best naruto fanfics I’ve ever read is the author leaving some information out in favor of fast pacing. I want to hear the creatures thoughts on chakra and it’s training and development of techniques. I love those details and seeing how an author can further flesh out a power system that was not fully explained in canon. Also, the MCs intelligence is a bit inconsistent. He will detect some plots instantly and be a hyper genius at one point, yet he somehow did not read deep enough into the situation with itachi. Though, he is seemingly looking into that now. Anyway, nitpicking aside, I am giving this story an 8.8/10 and a strong reccomendation. If you do not like the first few chapters I can say that it gets much better after the first few. Looking forward to more.
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