call it an au if your not going to use cannon timeliness correctly. Your writing itself is good no grammar issues, sentence structure works, and your lyrical flow is awesome. however as I stated before study the original and use correct info before just throwing things out aka children in their first year wouldn't know what a death eater was, nor did the deatheaters exist at that point the parents of the students were knights of walpurgis. Those children eventually went on to become dearheaters when riddle came out as voldemort but not this radically early.
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thank you for the review, Lord Voldemort rose to power in 1970, which was when the Death Eaters began to adopt their name. It is highly likely that someone like Sirius Black would have been aware of this development.
where they called knights of something before death eaters?
Morscribe:thank you for the review, Lord Voldemort rose to power in 1970, which was when the Death Eaters began to adopt their name. It is highly likely that someone like Sirius Black would have been aware of this development.
