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Don't have many complaints just slow the story you are making him too op pulling new spells out of his crack anyways good work aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaavvvvvvv
Any romance?
I would love if you focus on the relationship betwean him and McGonagol a litle more and have her be a importent part of his life.
I would like at least he made 3 more friends. Maybe 2 of them could be lily and Snape so that he could change the fact that they stopped being friends. I don't care that you could change the part where lily and James came to be together but it would be nice with another perspective when lily and Snape are still friends and the Mc helps the misunderstanding between them. Make him know faster of the problems in the magic society and make him think on how to protect himself from harm. Maybe develop a part where he is protected without his knowledge with his family that he doesn't know of yet. He should be protected somehow because of Dumbledore ideals. I am kinda excited and curious to know what will happen when he has access to the ROR. You could give him certain permissions within the castle without Dumbledore know, since it's connect to who we know. One of those permissions can be to know all the castle pathways and whole system and update it along the years with his knowledge of both magical e muggle worlds. Great story btw [img=update]
Just reading the MC's surname in the title made me burst into laughter.
