here's the author's review as the reader. no, I am not boasting about the book. let's start with cones... well there are too many. first of all... the grammar is sometimes shaky, sometimes stable and sometimes it's too high. but worry not, the first 21 chapters are okay with grammar, then after 23 to 35 are only readable, but after that everything is okay. second, the mc does not become overpowered before chapter 50, so don't say that he didn't use his eyes properly or shadow clones, you have kept patience and he will use his powers properly and basically he is overpowered after chapter 80, and don't worry he will not loos a single fight. third... the character of Hinata is changed so some of you find it odd be warned she is Yandere. fourth... everyone might seem powerful but they are not powerful than Naruoto. and let's talk about some good things. first... the romance is good if you somehow manage to pass 20 chapters, and his relationship with other girls is not in a forced way, so no Pokemon hunting. second... the fights are good if you can imagine they will become more enjoyable. third... after chapter 90 the story focused on multiple povs that add depth to the story. fourth... the conversations between his family are the core of a certain arc if you reach at that point you will find out... well, that's what I have to say... in a nutshell, the novel is a mess like this review... if you want to ask before reading you can ask in comments... hope you have a good day friend...
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wt happened to the system tag...
Dropped? Answer is always yes.
System has been long forgotten for making way for fillers, time travel and super forced drama. Plus haram ... ahem harem, 100% halal harem. P.S: if you wander about the gif, it's from a movie called 'A walk in the Clouds". This has nothing to do with harem. The movie is sappy romantic movie. Scene is about girls are crushing grapes for wine.
is this mtl
nope 👎 but i am rewriting it so you better read that one
