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Melshan
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2023-08-18 07:57

HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM

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Melshan
MelshanLv7

Honestly, I didn't like the part of the synopsis where the MC would join Xebec's crew, please don't make the MC subordinate to anyone, he has to create his own crew.

Devils_hand
Devils_handAuthor

he will make his own crew, he will be on his ship temporary

Melshan:Honestly, I didn't like the part of the synopsis where the MC would join Xebec's crew, please don't make the MC subordinate to anyone, he has to create his own crew.
Melshan
MelshanLv7

Harém: Hinata, Hanabi, Ino, Shion, Karin, Tsunade, Mei Terumi, Samui, Mabui, Ryūzetsu.......

Jama1810
Jama1810Lv4

Sauce for the gif?

iLoveHaremS2
iLoveHaremS2Lv2

HOTD

Jama1810:Sauce for the gif?
Wesley_Hylry
Wesley_HylryLv14

it is a shame that is only few girls '-.-

Melshan:Harém: Hinata, Hanabi, Ino, Shion, Karin, Tsunade, Mei Terumi, Samui, Mabui, Ryūzetsu.......
ZaweRD
ZaweRDLv14

Please go and throw yourself into dumpster.

Supreme_Ancestor_
Supreme_Ancestor_Lv4

bro read One piece : path to power by paradox you will change your mind 😇

Melshan:Honestly, I didn't like the part of the synopsis where the MC would join Xebec's crew, please don't make the MC subordinate to anyone, he has to create his own crew.
JmWoods
JmWoodsLv14

Is it bad that I knew what anime the gif came from

iLoveHaremS2:HOTD
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Devils_hand
Devils_handAuthor

here's the author's review as the reader. no, I am not boasting about the book. let's start with cones... well there are too many. first of all... the grammar is sometimes shaky, sometimes stable and sometimes it's too high. but worry not, the first 21 chapters are okay with grammar, then after 23 to 35 are only readable, but after that everything is okay. second, the mc does not become overpowered before chapter 50, so don't say that he didn't use his eyes properly or shadow clones, you have kept patience and he will use his powers properly and basically he is overpowered after chapter 80, and don't worry he will not loos a single fight. third... the character of Hinata is changed so some of you find it odd be warned she is Yandere. fourth... everyone might seem powerful but they are not powerful than Naruoto. and let's talk about some good things. first... the romance is good if you somehow manage to pass 20 chapters, and his relationship with other girls is not in a forced way, so no Pokemon hunting. second... the fights are good if you can imagine they will become more enjoyable. third... after chapter 90 the story focused on multiple povs that add depth to the story. fourth... the conversations between his family are the core of a certain arc if you reach at that point you will find out... well, that's what I have to say... in a nutshell, the novel is a mess like this review... if you want to ask before reading you can ask in comments... hope you have a good day friend...

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