Item: Naruto : Pure Blood
Rating: 4.2
Author: PengZ

PengZLv21yr

2023-07-01 22:49

Dear author, I would love to give full 5 stars but there's too much grammatical and typo error that ruins your "high quality" story. But other than that, everything else is excellent.

Naruto : Pure Blood

Devils_hand

4.7

148 Chs

Liked by 3 people

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Devils_handAuthor

thanks bro, as for some mistakes I will correct them as soon as someone mentioned it or I will find out

1yr

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here's the author's review as the reader. no, I am not boasting about the book. let's start with cones... well there are too many. first of all... the grammar is sometimes shaky, sometimes stable and sometimes it's too high. but worry not, the first 21 chapters are okay with grammar, then after 23 to 35 are only readable, but after that everything is okay. second, the mc does not become overpowered before chapter 50, so don't say that he didn't use his eyes properly or shadow clones, you have kept patience and he will use his powers properly and basically he is overpowered after chapter 80, and don't worry he will not loos a single fight. third... the character of Hinata is changed so some of you find it odd be warned she is Yandere. fourth... everyone might seem powerful but they are not powerful than Naruoto. and let's talk about some good things. first... the romance is good if you somehow manage to pass 20 chapters, and his relationship with other girls is not in a forced way, so no Pokemon hunting. second... the fights are good if you can imagine they will become more enjoyable. third... after chapter 90 the story focused on multiple povs that add depth to the story. fourth... the conversations between his family are the core of a certain arc if you reach at that point you will find out... well, that's what I have to say... in a nutshell, the novel is a mess like this review... if you want to ask before reading you can ask in comments... hope you have a good day friend...

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Axon_115Lv4

Haven't read a word but gave it a five star. Just because my bro said Hinata is the best girl. I hope author bro won't drop it.

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MelshanLv7

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TRAaaash. Chapters are 50 words. Each chapter is barely a scene. Mc opens mouth and kurama is ready to spread his cheeks for him. how is this4.7 rating? I'm legit disgusted.

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bro what happened .where is chapter and why naruto is not using his six eyes.remember he got from system. . .. . . ?

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Hinata ,tsunade, ino in the Harem please 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺

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