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Kabuk5
Kabuk5Lv141yr
2023-12-01 19:42

Read 24 chapters but couldn't continue, as this story seems to be written specifically for those who enjoy reading about one thing only - crafting. While entertaining, there was no character background or development so far, and I reached the end of my patience, since I want more than just crafting - this is not a bad story, I'm simply not the intended audience, but I would have appreciated a warning of sorts at the beginning. Grammar and world background could use some work, but since the story is craft focused, there's no world background whatsoever so far.

DC: with D&D Artificer

Lythan_Page
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12 Chs

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Lythan_Page
Lythan_PageAuthor

yes, I did give you guys a warning, and the story goes on there is some background information on who he is, as for the world itself, the mistake I made first was basing the world in the cw series Naomi but I change to the arrow verse later, Into the arrow series

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my favourite type genre for the novels. I hate romance and harem type novels.

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I can’t tell you how much I enjoy reading crafting focus stories hope for more 😀

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SentimentalReader2
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It's an incredible story, also since you're already based on a D&D system one can understand the skills more, it goes slowly but surely, you can see the love and effort he puts into the chapters by explaining how he makes his artifacts (although I have no idea of the components or parts, but it is still understood without being an expert), in addition to the fact that the updates are constant, keep up the good work author and have a lot of free time to write even more chapters

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well, because i am the author ...........................................................................................................................

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Clark_Elkins
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This has a lot of potential but I feel it’s too sporadic and a little hard to follow. I think if you rewrite it out and improve its flow you’ll have a much better webnovel.

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The_Lorekeeper
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Sweet, my favorite class and my favorite story type! Looking forward to see where this goes!Haven't read yet, so middle of the road stars.

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Thats just good.MC is good and story progressing very steadily. I hope it will continue to be this way

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