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Clark_ElkinsLv11yr
2023-12-12 21:50

This has a lot of potential but I feel it’s too sporadic and a little hard to follow. I think if you rewrite it out and improve its flow you’ll have a much better webnovel.

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Lythan_PageAuthor

yap, already working on it, and I am even reworking the whole system

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