as of chapter 10writing quality - 10story development - 10character design - 4updates- 10world background- 10well it's a fantastic fic the only problems I have are the mc's talking like a girl he's so annoying and talks too much he always tells his plan to people he only knows for days or explaining to them why he does that or did this like bruh. and what in a world you'll find a random guy who you want to be a mentor to know how to use Reverse Cursed Technique and Domain Expansion? sounds like a lazy plot to me. but all good that's the only plot hole or lazy writing I've seen from the fic
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Thanks for the review! I do agree that Atlas does tend to overexplain sometimes, but he also wants people to understand and work with him instead of just being all mysterious. One thing I find annoying about some media is how simple problems could be solved with a bit better communication. Maybe I lean into that a bit to much, so thank you for the feedback on that! As for Frank, yes it is convenient how he comes across Frank, but that is further explored as it wasn't just 'chance' that made it happen. Thanks for reading and I am glad you are enjoying it!
