Meh, there's full of flaws here and some specific things that I didn't like.Let me start by saying that you got the timeline wrong. Also, the interactions between Toji and Atlas were horrible due to the fact that Toji would not bother to waste his time with the MC, simply because it doesn't benefit him. And we got a main character trying too hard to be cool, smoking in a 16 years old body, piercings and cringey quips during a fight.

Because I have already read the author's other story, this instantly deserves 5 stars from me. If it's anything like the old one, which I'm sure it will be, then this one will be fire as well. I can't wait

Your stories have a lot of potential but I think what really stops you from continuing with the story in a more consistent way is the future knowledge of the protagonist, it would be better to reincarnate them without their memories or at least without the memories of the work they are going to , this would work in worlds like marvel or dc which are gigantic universes but in animes like jujutsu and boku no hero it is difficult because there are things that unfortunately must happen, this is just my opinion of course, nothing important.

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as of chapter 10writing quality - 10story development - 10character design - 4updates- 10world background- 10well it's a fantastic fic the only problems I have are the mc's talking like a girl he's so annoying and talks too much he always tells his plan to people he only knows for days or explaining to them why he does that or did this like bruh. and what in a world you'll find a random guy who you want to be a mentor to know how to use Reverse Cursed Technique and Domain Expansion? sounds like a lazy plot to me. but all good that's the only plot hole or lazy writing I've seen from the fic

This story is incredible and it's tied together very well, and it's insanely good. These memories of Frank's past are very good, and I confess that seeing this interaction between Toji and Megumi makes everything even better despite their losses. I think it would be really cool for Maki to be trained by Toji since they are very similar. Well that's it, until the next chapter

It's good one of the better JJK fanfic that I read the only issue I had are the Author use too many words to describe something Author will use 20 or more words in describing something that can be describe in 5 or less words.

Hey author, theres this jjk ff can reborn in jjk with time cursed Technique, have you read it before?

This here is no novel, it's a book. The quality of the writing is too high, with the writing style not something light like a novel. It's very tiring to read, not because it's boring or bad, just because it's not a novel style. I got to chapter 10 and I couldn't read anymore so I stopped. But I can definitely say the plot and grammar were excellent.