Item: The System of Villain
Rating: 4.6

ThreyaMidnightLv121yr

2023-06-22 17:46

Hey, I love your work. however, as I stated in the comment I made, there were some grammatical errors that kept me (and possibly other readers) from completely enjoying the story. If you have the time to edit them, please do so! As it will increase reader's satisfaction.

The System of Villain

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