Item: The System of Villain
Rating: 4.8
Author: MissScarlet

MissScarletLv11yr

2023-06-26 18:39

This story is really interesting, although, it needs a bit of tweaking on the grammatical side. And, personally, I think the plot is really cool! Anyway, I hope the author keeps working on this one, since it has a good potential.

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