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Wolf_God
Wolf_GodLv151yr
2023-08-05 12:53

The story is way too fast paced, the grammar is moderate at best, and in the first two chapters it seems like the author is trying to squeeze 10 chapters into it, it's very confusing. I think it has good promise, but it needs an editor in my opinion

Apocalypse - Infinite Resource System

AllenWorker
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583 Chs

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System_Department
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I read your review and I understand your pain bro. Check out the works Young Master System: My Mother Is The Matriarch or Supervillain Idol System: My Sidekick Is A Yandere. I’m not the author but the editor and moderator and I can say they are above average. So give them a try.

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Interesting concept, but poorly executed. The mc is absolute trash, the story is mid at best and the world around it uninteresting. The author either is a 14yo „sigma male“ or a 20yo Incel who has never even talked to a women irl.

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GigiBlack
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is that girl alanna gonna be the only one on the team?🙁 add some more teammates preferably male. I cant take another female joining the team

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bilal_hicher
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total waste of time wow to be able to dominate with a single pistol thats wild 😂the level concept is not explained at allthe girl join him under threats and manipulation days later she's in love with him

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AllenWorker
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Author here. Forgive me, this is some encouragement I give myself. I think this book is well written[img=recommend][img=recommend] I want to thank you all for the support, it means so much to me. Thanks for reading, and I hope to see you in the future.

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King_soul
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Stroy: Trash Development: Trash Mc: Tash Translation: Tash

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Fabien_Moreno
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so for those Who like to read apocalypse stuff be warned.the MC is literally à psychopath (at least within the few first chapter some of his action are extremelly disturbing SPOILER like taking à girl hostage until she sign à slave "contract" or he will throw her to the zombies ....END SPOILER)there some other problem like à contract that appear out of nowhere and some of the stuff seem really rushed.... i just hope it will become better after some chapter ..

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Uchiha_Patriarch
Uchiha_PatriarchLv1

I had some hopes for this one, since I don't see the word 'Apocalypse' bring flinged around anywhere. Then, I understood why it never showed up in he recommended list.

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immortal_water
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wrote a review but app crashed now have to write again by reading synopsis for the novel it feels like Chinese novel but IT'S NOT story pasing is good not dragging the plot or very fast some MC IS smart and some righteous person HE GOT HIS GOAL SETsome of the bad things there is not a background given from starting how he got the system and some things are not clear as he have unlimited supply of those things for a day or whole life by reading it fell like it's for whole life needs some clarification and some time while character have internal thoughts there is no sign but confusing but manageable but i suggest author to have ' ' these sign for internal thoughts I don't know why webnovel have not given contract to author as story is good you should definitely give it a try review till 82 chapter

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