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2023-08-11 11:25

The MC is so disgusting! It's one thing to be weary of strangers, it's a complete other to tie up a woman and constantly make remarks joking about SAing her. Usually this type of character is the villain yet the author deliberately chose them as the main character!Outside of that, things just seem poorly explained and inconsistent. The MC goes on and on about being defenseless with no weapons. Gets excited because one weapon, a gun, becomes available on the world trade. Then, without mentioning other weapons being purchased or available for purchase, he has a bunch of bombs, crow bars, etc just a few paragraphs later. The inconsistency is very off putting.

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AverageNovelReader
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Literally! Genuinely worst thing I’ve ever read

Spirit_Immortal
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check out..... blood Warrior Harem ...just once if u don't wanna have regrets

AverageNovelReader:Literally! Genuinely worst thing I’ve ever read
Hiricks
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The titles alone shows how shitty they might be

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