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After 200+ chapters and one volume complete, I feel like it’s only right that I leave a review sharing my thoughts. The first volume focused a lot on basic introductions to the world and people. I struggled a lot with the world building elements and plot pace at the start. Because this is Webnovel, I tried to rush the story in order for it to fit the more fast paced stories on here but quickly realized the style wasn’t feasible for me. It made some interactions feel forced, particularly the first scene with you know who.  It’s tough, planning, remembering characters/plots/locations/minor details and describing scenes in a way that is easy for readers to follow and feel immersed in, especially when you have to release multiple chapters a day to have your book stand out.  I’ve long given up attempting to match this because it only leads me to look back and wish I did some parts of the story a little differently. But regardless of mistakes made, I keep moving forward, because that’s the only real way to improve. Learn from a mistake, try not to repeat it. Despite this story’s flaws, I’m happy I have genuine readers who support this, be it just by reading every now and then to actually buying the privilege. I’m thankful for it all.  All in all, still learning as I go so any feedback is greatly appreciated. 

That’s an interesting theory, given the circumstances. Very creative way to view things

during long days, short nights, the sun is out pretty early. Not sure if that's the same everywhere, if not, then my bad

Alot of people expected an instant switch in personality, basically the shit we see in isekai anime or something.

not exactly, will make sense later. Can't explain without spoiling

one main one the other is in the master bedroom

He sometimes takes others women