Review Detail of jaro_onody in Shinigami Of The Marvel World
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this one is really hard to review, quality is really good but when reading it feels like i read a Wiki page and not a story. Your world description is to much and complicated ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Shinigami Of The Marvel World
Cosmic_phantom_19
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Thank you for your review I am sorry for your inconvenience But what I am doing for now is just buildings it's foundation and hence I tried explaining different duties and responsibilities of different groups which I didn't see in Bleach. Just wait patiently for some chapters as it will finally be time where our mc goes outside and explore, meet new peoples which I will tr my best to create.
Cosmic_phantom_19:Thank you for your review I am sorry for your inconvenience But what I am doing for now is just buildings it's foundation and hence I tried explaining different duties and responsibilities of different groups which I didn't see in Bleach. Just wait patiently for some chapters as it will finally be time where our mc goes outside and explore, meet new peoples which I will tr my best to create.
i agree with this review. explaining and laying foundation isnt what this review is criticising but the shakespearian headache inducing descriptions. the use of language is impressive the ability to describe the same freakin thing four times with deferent levels of profoundity truly boggles the mind i find myself skipping it as i am too uncultured to enjoy such depths of literary genius. Storys is awesome be perfect if you toned down the flowery language from 11 to say a 5
Cosmic_phantom_19:Thank you for your review I am sorry for your inconvenience But what I am doing for now is just buildings it's foundation and hence I tried explaining different duties and responsibilities of different groups which I didn't see in Bleach. Just wait patiently for some chapters as it will finally be time where our mc goes outside and explore, meet new peoples which I will tr my best to create.