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SpringBreeze20
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2023-09-21 15:13

Writing Quality: 5/5 It's good and easy to understand. Stability of Updates: 5/5 2chapters per day Story Development: 5/5 Just enough to keep you want reading Character Design: 5/5 i love all the characters and their unique traits World Background: 5/5 everything is explained and nothing is left out Overall a good book. A must read if you like litRPG.

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The series is very interesting, especially for those who like games without mixing reality and virtual so much (something I prefer), interesting character and the same goes for his class, good potential. However, something that I think could be improved, the concept of infinite charisma is very interesting and fun, but I found it a little wasted, firstly I think that charisma should not be limited to conquering others romantically, being intimate and having high charisma should not imply developing romantic relationship or feelings for the other, especially when the MC in his speech and behavior does not bring any hint of romance or flirtation. On the contrary, it becomes a little annoying constant marriage proposals or NPCs falling in love, even if it was a little fun in the beginning, having charisma and intimacy can define different relationship sensations, such as respect, friendship, brotherhood, admiration, without needing to fall in love. , in addition to the fact that only women fall in love and propose to the MC makes this construction illogical, at least if it were for everyone to fall in love with the MC it should apply to both genders.... Another author point, being a non-harem series, having several women constantly fall in love (in real life and in the game) with the MC, doesn't really give the idea of non-harem, on the contrary, it seems to insinuate a future harem, especially when there is a greater presence of female characters than male characters in the series. I think it would be interesting to rethink the concept of charisma and intimate relationships, especially when it's a non-harem series. In any case, the series has an excellent construction of the real world and the virtual world. A well-established game with a good explanation and variety of races, classes and skills, and interesting things... I especially liked the MC class, I found it quite fascinating... But the points above I think are interesting to rethink, I particularly think that the fact of bringing several scenes from the real world is not so necessary, after all it is still a series focused on virtual reality and I think moderation is necessary in this return to reality.

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