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Eshmael
EshmaelLv111yr
2023-07-08 01:19

So far, I’ve only read in 20 chapters, but this work seems very promising. Reading a typical VR power fantasy, you’d expect an overpowered MC, futuristic society, and an immersive world. With this novel, you do get those things, but also a little more. A hint of comedy, a promise of character development, some power levelling, and surprisingly: no regression. Although this means the MC won’t steal every opportunity, or have unparalleled techniques like practically every other VR-fantasy. This setup shows how the MC will encounter new opportunities, and in the future, will develop his unique play-style. Personally, I find this will make for a refreshing story that is enjoyable to read, and I hope you will think so too. ————————— Below are some justifications for my rating:* Writing Quality: Really good. The paragraphs are nicely separated, sentences are concise and to the point, everything is well described, and there is no unnecessary filler. 5* Update Stability: Reliable. It’s a little bit scary how good the update schedule is, especially considering how high-quality the chapters are. 5* Story Development: Starting. You can’t truly rate a story’s development based on the first few chapters, but so far so good. I have faith it will only get better with time. 5* Character Design: Well-done. The MC hasn’t shown the most distinct personality traits, has decent reasoning behind his actions, and a poorer background is normal. Characters are described clearly is a plus. 4* (Also, the Game Devs remind me of those in Bofuri.) World Background: Upcoming. As of now, the protagonist has only just woken up from his coma, and begun his new journey. We haven’t seen much of the outside world, other than a small outing. But I’m fairly certain it will be expanded upon soon. 4* Overall: Right now it’s nothing exceptional, but I beseech you to try reading it. At least before it gets so long you can’t unlock it all.

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MiuNovels
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thank you very much for the long review 🙏💕

sai_Krishna_9094
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What's CH

Dream_Lord14
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Try out this new novel.Survival Oddysey

ObservantReader
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chapter I would assume.

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Assassinator_Gamer
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Charisma

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The series is very interesting, especially for those who like games without mixing reality and virtual so much (something I prefer), interesting character and the same goes for his class, good potential. However, something that I think could be improved, the concept of infinite charisma is very interesting and fun, but I found it a little wasted, firstly I think that charisma should not be limited to conquering others romantically, being intimate and having high charisma should not imply developing romantic relationship or feelings for the other, especially when the MC in his speech and behavior does not bring any hint of romance or flirtation. On the contrary, it becomes a little annoying constant marriage proposals or NPCs falling in love, even if it was a little fun in the beginning, having charisma and intimacy can define different relationship sensations, such as respect, friendship, brotherhood, admiration, without needing to fall in love. , in addition to the fact that only women fall in love and propose to the MC makes this construction illogical, at least if it were for everyone to fall in love with the MC it should apply to both genders.... Another author point, being a non-harem series, having several women constantly fall in love (in real life and in the game) with the MC, doesn't really give the idea of non-harem, on the contrary, it seems to insinuate a future harem, especially when there is a greater presence of female characters than male characters in the series. I think it would be interesting to rethink the concept of charisma and intimate relationships, especially when it's a non-harem series. In any case, the series has an excellent construction of the real world and the virtual world. A well-established game with a good explanation and variety of races, classes and skills, and interesting things... I especially liked the MC class, I found it quite fascinating... But the points above I think are interesting to rethink, I particularly think that the fact of bringing several scenes from the real world is not so necessary, after all it is still a series focused on virtual reality and I think moderation is necessary in this return to reality.

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