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Deaps
DeapsLv149mth
2024-03-04 22:51

I liked it a lot, in recent times this novel was a breath of fresh air. Nothing too cliche which was nice, sometimes sure you will think some characters acted dumb, but not often, MC isnt a simp, female lead is funny and cunning atleast for me, some comedy in the mix is very well made atleast for my taste. First 15 chaps were okay, but later it got better atleast in my opinion. Short version- worth a try, 50 chapters is enough for you to know if you like it as the style/actions stay mostly consistent

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MiuNovels
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Thank you for the review 🙏

Deaps
DeapsLv14

Keep up the good work, you got this ;)

MiuNovels:Thank you for the review 🙏
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The series is very interesting, especially for those who like games without mixing reality and virtual so much (something I prefer), interesting character and the same goes for his class, good potential. However, something that I think could be improved, the concept of infinite charisma is very interesting and fun, but I found it a little wasted, firstly I think that charisma should not be limited to conquering others romantically, being intimate and having high charisma should not imply developing romantic relationship or feelings for the other, especially when the MC in his speech and behavior does not bring any hint of romance or flirtation. On the contrary, it becomes a little annoying constant marriage proposals or NPCs falling in love, even if it was a little fun in the beginning, having charisma and intimacy can define different relationship sensations, such as respect, friendship, brotherhood, admiration, without needing to fall in love. , in addition to the fact that only women fall in love and propose to the MC makes this construction illogical, at least if it were for everyone to fall in love with the MC it should apply to both genders.... Another author point, being a non-harem series, having several women constantly fall in love (in real life and in the game) with the MC, doesn't really give the idea of non-harem, on the contrary, it seems to insinuate a future harem, especially when there is a greater presence of female characters than male characters in the series. I think it would be interesting to rethink the concept of charisma and intimate relationships, especially when it's a non-harem series. In any case, the series has an excellent construction of the real world and the virtual world. A well-established game with a good explanation and variety of races, classes and skills, and interesting things... I especially liked the MC class, I found it quite fascinating... But the points above I think are interesting to rethink, I particularly think that the fact of bringing several scenes from the real world is not so necessary, after all it is still a series focused on virtual reality and I think moderation is necessary in this return to reality.

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