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Deaps
DeapsLv1411mth
2024-03-04 22:51

I liked it a lot, in recent times this novel was a breath of fresh air. Nothing too cliche which was nice, sometimes sure you will think some characters acted dumb, but not often, MC isnt a simp, female lead is funny and cunning atleast for me, some comedy in the mix is very well made atleast for my taste. First 15 chaps were okay, but later it got better atleast in my opinion. Short version- worth a try, 50 chapters is enough for you to know if you like it as the style/actions stay mostly consistent

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Thank you for the review 🙏

Deaps
DeapsLv14

Keep up the good work, you got this ;)

MiuNovels:Thank you for the review 🙏
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