Item: Pokemon: Brock's Younger Brother?
Rating: 5
Author: Del123

Del123Author1yr

2023-06-10 22:09

If y’all got questions on things about the fic then I’ll gladly reply if I think it’s fine to answer. This fic is just something I’m doing out of boredom and am doing in class as I procrastinate. That’s a lot of time to make chapters lol. But don’t get me wrong, this fic is “planned out” but I tend to change things a lot xD. So nothing is set in stone just yet.

Pokemon: Brock's Younger Brother?

Del123

4.9

36 Chs

Liked by 13 people

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Drako_0692Lv1

timeline? and will it be only from kanto?

1yr

Del123Author

The timeline is around a few months after the Johto league where Ash lost. And when the MC starts his journey is when Ash goes to Hoenn and starts his Journey there.

Drako_0692:timeline? and will it be only from kanto?

1yr

Star_RoyaltyLv14

is he going to be a type specialist? or a generalist?

1yr

Del123Author

A bit of both he will have a team for rock because of the gym and wil have a “main” team with different types. But he will use both deending in the fight.

Star_Royalty:is he going to be a type specialist? or a generalist?

1yr

ZancroweLv1

Interés amoroso?

1yr

Del123Author

I’ve got an idea who it is but not confirmed

Zancrowe:Interés amoroso?

1yr

_The_Shady_Lv4

I will be happy with anything but don't stop in between(about haitus)...

Del123:A bit of both he will have a team for rock because of the gym and wil have a “main” team with different types. But he will use both deending in the fight.

1yr

_The_Shady_Lv4

An advice why not make him a steel type specialist as his (main) team, but don't restrict him from catching other types as his (sub) team. the reason being i have not seen many specialist type Pokemon story which was completed and the idea of being a specialist is unique and refreshing.While if you choose a particular type steel is the best option....anyways it depends on you-no pressure go in any direction you wants it's ultimately your own Fanfic and your choice....cheers.

Del123:A bit of both he will have a team for rock because of the gym and wil have a “main” team with different types. But he will use both deending in the fight.

1yr

dazzle_dorkLv4

is it harem? please say no

1yr

Del123Author

I’m only planning for one fml.

dazzle_dork:is it harem? please say no

1yr

aranu_broLv4

Del123:I’m only planning for one fml.
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1yr

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