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Lucifer20
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2023-09-30 11:50

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Pokemon: Brock's Younger Brother?

Del123
4.9
36 Chs

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True_Vanity
True_VanityLv4

So far I’ve enjoyed the story. I Cant wait for it to get even better!

1yr

Del123
Del123Author

If y’all got questions on things about the fic then I’ll gladly reply if I think it’s fine to answer. This fic is just something I’m doing out of boredom and am doing in class as I procrastinate. That’s a lot of time to make chapters lol. But don’t get me wrong, this fic is “planned out” but I tend to change things a lot xD. So nothing is set in stone just yet.

1yr
simpp
simppLv1

were u inspired by hard enough..................................................................................................................................

1yr
DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv14

Awesome pokemon story. Very original in choosing a sibling of brock as the MC. I love the family dynamic, his choice of pokemon, and the overall trajectory of the story so far. Grammar and updating speed are on point as well. Nothing truly to disparage or criticize that wouldn't be nitpicking or personal preference. also Bea is wifey for lifey material. Just saying. Keep up the good work!

1yr
1vel
1velLv4

Have enjoyed it so far time seems like a factor unlike in a lot of other stories. Another thing is that the mcs choices seems resonable

8mth
jose_carmona
jose_carmonaLv1

Reveal spoiler

1yr
RealJoke_Pota
RealJoke_PotaLv4

It's a gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood story... now go read it ya jelly filled donut.

1yr
EnragedKing
EnragedKingLv15

I'm quite happy with how this story is progressing and I'm looking forward to more chapters.

1yr
Duke_Sahib
Duke_SahibLv4

ok so writing quality is awesome and the author updates regularly what i think is a bit lackluster is the story development because of the fast pace events. it isn't bad persay but still can be improved on by adding some events here and there. another thing i want to add is character development the character of MC is good but other characters are not well fleshed out such as Flint and Bea. one tip is that you can make Bea's character more serious as anime in the beginning and slowly mellow the character to show the willingness to interact ( the cafe interaction was good but you could have added it bit further in the story ) overall the story is fantastic you can improve on the story as you progress I am looking forward to see the story progress

1yr
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