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Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv41yr
2023-06-22 01:23

The protagonist's name has to be changed; you can call him Max, Peter, Antonio, Ivan... There are no excuses for publishing a fanfic novel with such horrible spelling. To publish a novel in English or another language, you must correctly use the spelling rules of the language and adapt it to the cultural context of that language. It's not easy, but using an incomprehensible and inconsistent Chinese name in a novel written in English for a non-Chinese audience is stupid.

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Jonathan_Zarco
Jonathan_ZarcoLv2

It's a translation bro

Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

🙄 So...?

Jonathan_Zarco:It's a translation bro
Jonathan_Zarco
Jonathan_ZarcoLv2

You still ask...🤦 It is as if you required the author of TODG to change all the names, places of the characters, and according to you, delete everything that has to do with China and Americanize the entire novel, to adapt it to the English-speaking public.

Bob_Uchiha_XD:🙄 So...?
Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

Yes!!!!!!! Just like Hollywood, Netflix and other successful platforms do.

Jonathan_Zarco:You still ask...🤦 It is as if you required the author of TODG to change all the names, places of the characters, and according to you, delete everything that has to do with China and Americanize the entire novel, to adapt it to the English-speaking public.
Jonathan_Zarco
Jonathan_ZarcoLv2

🤔🤨 ok

Bob_Uchiha_XD:Yes!!!!!!! Just like Hollywood, Netflix and other successful platforms do.
HydeMary
HydeMaryLv14

you demands perfect translation to a novel you read for free? bruhh, here he posts unpaid and we read for free. if you want something perfect, there are still many novels out there.. the man isnt forcing anyone to be here, if you dont like it then thats it, so why complain? 🤔🤔

Bob_Uchiha_XD:Yes!!!!!!! Just like Hollywood, Netflix and other successful platforms do.
Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv12

Si va hacer una traducción lo mínimo es hacerlo bien , si no va a hacerlo bien mejor no haga nada

HydeMary:you demands perfect translation to a novel you read for free? bruhh, here he posts unpaid and we read for free. if you want something perfect, there are still many novels out there.. the man isnt forcing anyone to be here, if you dont like it then thats it, so why complain? 🤔🤔
hiatusy
hiatusyLv14

wow, congratulations on being delusional

Bob_Uchiha_XD:Yes!!!!!!! Just like Hollywood, Netflix and other successful platforms do.
Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

hiatusy:wow, congratulations on being delusional
Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

hiatusy:wow, congratulations on being delusional
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Sir_Jadeja
Sir_JadejaLv1

About the fanfiction.. Protagonist: The protagonist is a pure hater of NTR and it's all about killing the yellow hairs and saving those girls.. Characters: The heroines, well they are cowardly and stupid..like every girl on such type should be, but as the story progresses they also become the partners of justice with the protagonist, face their fears and kill those yellow hairs. Harem: The protagonist had a dream to open a harem just like every guy who transmigrates into an anime world but after knowing what kind of world it is, he refuses to open a harem..but well there's harem tag so whether he refuses or not doesn't matter.. Translation: That's probably the main point every one focussed on. But I just want to say that, The translation is actually quite decent if you ignore a few chinese metaphors which are quite easy to understand, for me they were, I don't know for any one else.. Also the translator has added many scenes that were not in te original fanfic..and actually there were many.. I know because I've read the original and I can say that he did a brilliant job. If you have not read the original one you wouldn't even know, they fit so perfectly in the story and actually made it better to read.. A lot of people have problem with the main character's name but it's fine, And if you have time then you can just add another version exactly the same as this one, using a japanese name, that would just make them shut up. So, overall even with all the problems, it deserves 4.5 stars, but since this is a proper NTR bashing fanfic and because the author did a lot of work to translate this, I am giving it 5 stars.

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