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2023-06-02 17:37

This book is one of the best-written books I've read so far, and it deserves to be discovered and acknowledged. Because of how well the MC's feelings were portrayed, you could easily relate to them. You'd feel as if you were a part of the tale. I simply wish there was more going on in one chapter. Overall, I enjoyed it! Job well done <3

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1stDaoistOfReading
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Thank you, alot and Ill try to incorporate more things in each chapter

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My readthrough was very enjoyable. A slow burn story with a lot of detail and description packed into every inch. Picturing scene to scene is a breeze with the level of attention the author gives the surroundings. I'll start off with writing quality. The author has a staggering amount of vocabulary to work with painting a clear image. That and the way they describe certain scenes leave me in awe with the level of accuracy it has to the real world and moments that happen in my own life. Stability of Updates is very good considering this story just started. 6 chapters in the first week with a high level of quality for each of them. Story Development is a slow burn compared to most and this is done really well. The author uses these moments to focus on the scenes and feelings they are trying to depict for the characters and the state of the world. Character design is something else, each character feels like someone that could exist in the real world. All having very grounded thought out personalities and feelings related to the development of the plot or other characters. World background is given to the reader at a pretty detailed level, oftentimes the author will characterise a lot of places giving the reader a sense of history of the place or object or feeling the hope a mural might have for others. This is an incredible story in the making. The author writes to a very high level and has a vast vocabulary to draw you in with. More than likely you'll feel the characters feelings more so than just read them. The message this story delivers is really inspiring and I think that alone makes it worth checking out.

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