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Emmanuelboss36_Lv31yr
2023-06-26 20:25

The description really builds a world don't see many novels using metaphors as great as this. Apart from the really long chapters which is my personal preference it's rlly good.

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NocturnOwl
NocturnOwlLv13

My readthrough was very enjoyable. A slow burn story with a lot of detail and description packed into every inch. Picturing scene to scene is a breeze with the level of attention the author gives the surroundings. I'll start off with writing quality. The author has a staggering amount of vocabulary to work with painting a clear image. That and the way they describe certain scenes leave me in awe with the level of accuracy it has to the real world and moments that happen in my own life. Stability of Updates is very good considering this story just started. 6 chapters in the first week with a high level of quality for each of them. Story Development is a slow burn compared to most and this is done really well. The author uses these moments to focus on the scenes and feelings they are trying to depict for the characters and the state of the world. Character design is something else, each character feels like someone that could exist in the real world. All having very grounded thought out personalities and feelings related to the development of the plot or other characters. World background is given to the reader at a pretty detailed level, oftentimes the author will characterise a lot of places giving the reader a sense of history of the place or object or feeling the hope a mural might have for others. This is an incredible story in the making. The author writes to a very high level and has a vast vocabulary to draw you in with. More than likely you'll feel the characters feelings more so than just read them. The message this story delivers is really inspiring and I think that alone makes it worth checking out.

Cookie_lover
Cookie_loverLv3

"Rain Rain Go Away Come Again Another Day," penned by the author, is a delightful and heartwarming story that will captivate readers from beginning to end. With its blend of whimsy, relatable characters, and themes of hope and resilience, this web novel is a true gem. The story revolves around the protagonist's journey through life's challenges, symbolized by the recurring rain. The author beautifully portrays the protagonist's determination to overcome adversity and find happiness, even in the face of constant setbacks. The theme of hope shines brightly throughout the narrative, reminding readers of the indomitable human spirit and the power of positive thinking. The characters in this story are endearing and relatable, each with their unique struggles and aspirations. Readers will find themselves emotionally invested in their lives, cheering for their successes and empathizing with their disappointments. The author skillfully brings these characters to life, infusing them with depth, personality, and growth as they navigate their own personal journeys. The writing style employed by the author is engaging and immersive. The descriptive prose paints vivid pictures, allowing readers to visualize the scenes and feel the emotions experienced by the characters. The pacing is well-balanced, with moments of tension and anticipation interspersed with heartwarming and uplifting moments. The author's ability to create an emotional connection with readers is truly commendable. While the story excels in its portrayal of hope and resilience, there are instances where further exploration of certain subplots and secondary characters could enhance the overall narrative. However, this does not detract significantly from the overall enjoyment of the story. "Rain Rain Go Away Come Again Another Day" is a testament to the power of optimism, reminding readers that even in the darkest of times, there is always a glimmer of light. It is a story that will leave you with a warm and hopeful feeling, inspiring you to face life's challenges with courage and perseverance. If you're seeking a heartwarming tale that celebrates the human spirit and reminds us of the beauty in life's simplest joys, this web novel is a must-read. furthermore the author has crafted a captivating story that will resonate with readers long after the final page is turned. It just has 8 chapters at the momment but it has honestly captivated me from the depths of my soul.

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