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I'm red But I'm also purple, pink, yellow And sometimes blue

2021-02-26 JoinedPhilippines
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  • Shaine_chan
    Shaine_chana year ago
    Posted

    Great writing! The plot is interesting although I don't usually read BL. Good job writing such a story. This story has so much potential. I hope we see more of this novel

  • Shaine_chan
    Shaine_chana year ago
    Posted

    I find this story good because of how well this is written making me feel as if I was part of the story. The story progressed fast showing the different conflicts that their love was facing. However, I hope the chapters would be longer. I think it would be better if a lot of things happens in a chapter too.

  • Shaine_chan
    Shaine_chana year ago
    Posted

    So far everything is good. The writing quality is okay but I need more chapters to see to be able to write a detailed review. All I can say for now is that the story has great potential because of its interesting plot. I hope the author updates soon <3

  • Shaine_chan
    Shaine_chana year ago
    Commented

    ??? XD

  • Shaine_chan
    Shaine_chana year ago
    Posted

    That was a good read! The writing quality is exceptional and the plot is interesting too! I wish I could read more. I'm excited about Sorin's journey in fulfilling his revenge toward those who did him wrong. I could tell just with a few chapters that this will be a good story.

  • Shaine_chan
    Shaine_chana year ago
    Posted

    Personally, I could say that the plot is interesting as well as the MC's character. These kinds of character design interest me the most and I bet others will find it interesting too. My only concern is the writing quality of the book. I suggest not using multiple punctuation marks and paying attention to your grammar, capitalization, etc for reader better reading experience.

  • Shaine_chan
    Shaine_chana year ago
    Replied to THE_GOAT_HIMSELF

    Thank you so much <3

  • Shaine_chan
    Shaine_chana year ago
    Replied to THE_GOAT_HIMSELF

    Thank you for your feedback! That was done on purpose so that the readers would know what was about to happen. In that manner, they'll be curious to learn how or why it happened, as well as how the MC will make her final decisions. The novel will depict how the plot will gradually unfold, revealing numerous mysteries in the future that will shape each and every character. More challenges will come and you'll learn that the story is more than just what it is told.

  • Shaine_chan
    Shaine_chana year ago
    Posted

    So far so good. I really liked thr prologue. Just a little improvement in writing quality and all will be good. Overall I like the book!

  • Shaine_chan
    Shaine_chana year ago
    Replied to ARTelier

    thank you so much for the detailed review! I appreciate your support to my novel. Please stay tuned!

RAVEN: The Last Mission

"Mystery is one of humans' greatest weakness. Thriving to uncover it could either be the cause of new discovery or their greatest downfall." - Raven Maxene "Raven" has led a life of violence and terror as a skilled assassin, forced to work for an illegal organization that has used her younger brother hostage as a ransom for her loyalty. Being an orphan with no one but her brother in her life, Maxene was trapped in a life of murder and brutality, with no hopes for freedom. Years have passed, and the organization has finally given her an ultimatum: complete one final mission, and she and her brother will be able to live away from the organization and receive a million dollars to start a new life. Her target is a multi-billionaire named Geniere Arthur Falcon, who has been trying to uncover the organization and put a stop to its criminal activities. Maxene's task, however, was not going to be as easy as her previous missions. She has to infiltrate the university to get close to her target’s children as a first step in her mission. As she enters the university, Maxene quickly gets to work, thinking of befriending the siblings, getting to know them, and earning their trust. Ridger, Geniere's eldest son, appeared to be the most cautious, making it difficult for her to gain his trust. However, things start to get complicated when instead of gaining just his trust, they started to develop something more than just what her mission requires. Maxene's story is a gripping tale of love, family, and sacrifices. She would have to make tough choices, and the consequences of these actions would reverberate for a long time to come. It is up to her to decide what truly matters and who’s more important in her life. Would it be her and her brother’s freedom with a chance to live a brand-new life, or would it be the newfound family and relationships she has made, but with the risk of being discovered?

Shaine_chan · Urban
4.8
24 Chs

The Island Love Affair

Rachel Yoo had always dreamed of making it big as both an architect and an engineer. She spent most of her life studying and working tirelessly toward her goals. And when she reached that goal, she realized that she had never experienced being in a relationship. One summer, Rachel decided to take a break from her hectic life and treat herself to a solo vacation on an idyllic island. Just as when she thought she would never experience love, her life takes an unexpected turn when she discovers a man washed up on the shore with no memory of who he is or where he came from. Rachel found herself falling deeply in love for the first time in her life. The stranger, whom she named Henry, was charming, kind, and seemed to understand Rachel in a way that no one else ever had. However, just as Rachel was starting to believe that she had finally found happiness with Henry, she finds herself at odds with the man's said-to-be former girlfriend, who arrives on the island saying he has a life as a CEO and she has come to take him home. But what if she'll learn something worse that would crush her world and make her think of letting him go?

Shaine_chan · Urban
Not enough ratings
9 Chs

Genesis: The Lost Ruler of Nirvana

Dazaree, an adopted orphan and a family plague, ran away from home after accidentally releasing an unknown power and almost killing her aunt. Scared for what she has done, she ran away to the woods only to be surrounded by men trying to capture her. But then she was saved by Kithe, a man who has an incredible skill and power, trying to correct his past mistakes. Upon knowing that she isn’t alone in this world and there are other people who possess extraordinary ability, she decided to look for them only to find out that there is an organization named Kronos that captures people like them for inhuman experiments. Soon they will all gather and team up to fight and take down the organization but little did they know that Kronos is not the only organization that perform this horrendous activity to achieve such goal and that is to obtain power. As they go on their journey, they will meet people that are either an ally or an enemy. They will lose friends, get betrayed but regardless of all this, will they find love? But then a big responsibility awaits them, especially Dazaree. Will she be able to handle it or will she give up before even trying? Find out what will happen to Dazaree and her team as they continue in journey to find the truth and save their kind. [DISCLAIMER: Book cover photo is not mine, all credits goes to the owner.]

Shaine_chan · Fantasy
Not enough ratings
199 Chs