If you like Japanese stories, you would probably like this one. The story isn't bad, but it's just not my cup of tea. The MC is scared of girls and within just one chapter he steps back in fear of two different girls. I had one problem with the writing and that was the fact that the author kept referring to the MC as "the blue haired boy" constantly long after his name was known. It wasn't just once or twice, but almost every time he was mentioned. Writing Quality is 4 stars aside from what i mentioned. Stability of updates is 5 stars Story Development is 4 stars Character design is 4 stars World Background is 5 stars Like I said, it was good, just not for people like me.
Elyon
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LIKELevel1Goblin:Calm down. What I said did happen. He stepped back in fear of girls two separate times in one chapter. You should know this considering you wrote it. Why lie? I now see where you drew inspiration for your blue haired cry baby character though. My review wasn't even harsh. Makes me wonder what you do when you get an actual harsh review.image
I'll just point it out that the MC isn't afraid of girls. Stop spreading mis-information. You only read what? less than 10 chapters and you make an assumption that it's the truth when its far from reality. you should be more responsible when giving reviews to stories that you only read for a few chapters.
Calm down. What I said did happen. He stepped back in fear of girls two separate times in one chapter. You should know this considering you wrote it. Why lie? I now see where you drew inspiration for your blue haired cry baby character though. My review wasn't even harsh. Makes me wonder what you do when you get an actual harsh review.
Elyon:I'll just point it out that the MC isn't afraid of girls. Stop spreading mis-information. You only read what? less than 10 chapters and you make an assumption that it's the truth when its far from reality. you should be more responsible when giving reviews to stories that you only read for a few chapters.
Level1Goblin:Calm down. What I said did happen. He stepped back in fear of girls two separate times in one chapter. You should know this considering you wrote it. Why lie? I now see where you drew inspiration for your blue haired cry baby character though. My review wasn't even harsh. Makes me wonder what you do when you get an actual harsh review.image
Elyon:I'll just point it out that the MC isn't afraid of girls. Stop spreading mis-information. You only read what? less than 10 chapters and you make an assumption that it's the truth when its far from reality. you should be more responsible when giving reviews to stories that you only read for a few chapters.
Justify? There's nothing I should justify about it. This is a Weak-To-Strong story, with character progression. Very funny, someone actually dares to ask me how to justify my story when they've only read the beginning chapters.
Abhay_Singh_Anand:tell me how you justify what's written in first few chapter's
been a while lordseven. Good to see that you noticed this story of mine. Also, if you are interested do check out my newly published story, System's POV. It's one of my new masterpieces.
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Elyon:I'll just point it out that the MC isn't afraid of girls. Stop spreading mis-information. You only read what? less than 10 chapters and you make an assumption that it's the truth when its far from reality. you should be more responsible when giving reviews to stories that you only read for a few chapters.
No it’s not, this review is completely false, prolly person hasn’t read far enough and doesn’t realise that mc is just 17 year old kid at that time
Bibongsensei:so basically, its a dense underestimated protagonist who wants a girl but afraid of them?
17 yo KID? bro has been sheltered every second of his life ain't no one above 13 qualified to be called a kid unless you never saw the real world
Hizu:No it’s not, this review is completely false, prolly person hasn’t read far enough and doesn’t realise that mc is just 17 year old kid at that time
Have seen the real world, but factually below 18, you are still not considered adult, you are a kid. It’s not that deep
Ray_Virgo:17 yo KID? bro has been sheltered every second of his life ain't no one above 13 qualified to be called a kid unless you never saw the real world