meh translation, chatterbox system, and it's a Chinese fanfic. while the concept is decent, the dialogue and story itself are a bit off.

Hlo fellow novel readers, this is great and good novel with everything from Writing to story. But is has far too less chapters for me, as I already have caught with latest chapters. Can anyone recommend more novel like this as I only have one in my mind. But it also just started and has less chapters but got a great potential. If you wannna check it out. Don’t forget to like my review if you find that story good. Name Aspera: Allure of the Stars Hey, don,t forget my like on this review. This book got 2 chapters for now but still great so far. [img=recommend]

nice story, waiting for more chapters. Let's see together what will happen in this story.[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

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THANK you I found the other book with only 136 chapters and was mad they stopped it thank you so much this was my first good book

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Brother isn't it the MTL Novel One Punch Man: King Engine. I really liked that fanfiction but the characters had a different name. I would have rather preferred this novel in webnovel.

No hate for the translator. This should be a comedy right? For me its super cringe. Ima to old for this? Stopped at chapter 13. If you take out the comedy no need for translation it gets prob a much higher rating. I like the cards.