Item: Naruto: Family System
Rating: 1.4
Author: Zercival

ZercivalLv41yr

2023-07-28 04:26

Ok I am going to be very straight forward . This story is not for people who have average number of brain cells. Shisui is shown as an idiot who falls under everybody's schemes. Hiruzen is shown as a xianxia noble lord , scheming behind everybody's backs. Although .... well this is essentially a xianxia novel translation. YOU HEARD IT RIGHT FELLAS , all this hype , the ridiculous amount of power stones the story has . all for a "TRANSLATION" of a XIANXIA novel "Making Uchiha great again". You know I have already read the novel a little ahead (--_--; Till the extend I could before I had to start preserving my neurons , obviously) and I believe this is literally a scam. I dont understand how people on webnovel are so dumb!!! There nothing extraordinary in this novel AT ALL!! What is wrong with you dumb idiots . If you are so interested in this "masterpiece" why not visit MTL,lol. I can't even blame the author he is doing quite a job milking these fools. What a travesty and complete insult to all the authors on this platform; all because of US

Naruto: Family System

SoftCrow

3.6

295 Chs

Liked by 142 people

Replies13

PingvinchikLv1

this is a fanfic not the original story and they explained why it happened and i will repeat the fanfic this is when the story is different and if it shows hiruzen being manipulated and you don't like it don't be offended by this fanfic

1yr

Percy_LeonLv3

You can't be seriously saying this , right . This doesn't deserve to have that many power stones and high ranking. This is wrong because legitimate stories are being sidetracked for this . Its not fair at all

Pingvinchik:this is a fanfic not the original story and they explained why it happened and i will repeat the fanfic this is when the story is different and if it shows hiruzen being manipulated and you don't like it don't be offended by this fanfic

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PingvinchikLv1

no, I didn’t like it either, it’s just when you said that you don’t like that Hiruzen is different, I’m talking about it

Percy_Leon:You can't be seriously saying this , right . This doesn't deserve to have that many power stones and high ranking. This is wrong because legitimate stories are being sidetracked for this . Its not fair at all

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1yr

drago282007Lv4

Honestly I tried going on mtl but every novel I find sucks in my opinion and has way more gramar errors than this webnovel even if copied so I don't care

1yr

Apollyon_Lv4

Just put it through chat for instead of mtl

drago282007:Honestly I tried going on mtl but every novel I find sucks in my opinion and has way more gramar errors than this webnovel even if copied so I don't care

1yr

GENGHIS_KHANLv13

Shisui is an easily manipulated idiot though.

1yr

ApathyPotatoLv2

So Shisui really is an idiot, too naive to be a shinobi. This idiot actually talked about how he could change someone's will without the target's knowledge.And Hiruzen is not so kind and selfless, although not as evil as he is shown in many fanfictions. Naruto was discriminated against throughout the village, but the "kind" grandfather did not hate him and talked about the will of fire, what a kind person he is.

1yr

YoungMasterMengLv4

What the author said is actually correct tho , shishui becomes a believer of will of fire , hiruzen let danzo do all those evil things to manipulate (letting 2nd hokage die,genocide of uchiha)

1yr

One_AzureLv1

The fact that you wrote such so many words just to criticize the translate and people who enjoy this novel probably made you lose more braincells than reading the entire fix, it's a fanfiction it's just how they go they are not always winners, at most slightly better than the rest.

1yr

YoungMasterMengLv4

4th I mean 😅

YoungMasterMeng:What the author said is actually correct tho , shishui becomes a believer of will of fire , hiruzen let danzo do all those evil things to manipulate (letting 2nd hokage die,genocide of uchiha)

1yr

DaoistP1kjhsLv4

the translation here is much better than in the MTL, so I always read the updated chapters here but please hurry up the chapter release.I always leave a power stone per good chapter🫡

1yr

DaoistH0qkyJLv4

writing is good..story is developing nice different from canon...there is no grammatical mistake or any unreadable contentone major problem is long winded content...there are many redundant lines...

1yr

Hiraeth_999Lv4

Any good fanfic recommendations like this one?

1yr

Other Reviews

NlkrkcLv3

System shows real power is not dojutsu or jutsu but family

1yr

XiaoyunyunLv2

This so called author is fake support the real author. This guy is doing nothing but translating the original work and claiming as his own. He is claiming this work as own and making money off of it. The original Chinese novel is called "Konoha: Make Uchiha Great Again"

1yr

6_paths_of_bananaLv1

Konoha: make Uchiha great again (real name) I could tell this story was translated just from reading. I was always looking for the raws but the translator kept gate keeping. Lowkey dog thing to do and the translator is making money by selling off the story as his own. the updates are poor, when the “author” has 50+ chapters that have been already translated. Dude is just milking it. If I rated the translator then he’d only get a 2.5 because although the translations are readable there are mistakes in the grammar and whatnot.

1yr

XiaoyunyunLv2

Support the real author this guy is claiming another author work as his own and making money off of it. He isn't even crediting the original author of his work. The original Chinese novel is called "Konoha: Make Uchiha Great Again"

1yr

AllenCrossLv1

The author of the translation, please indicate in the synopsis the original title and also the author. I also ask you not to ask to subscribe to Petron for additional chapters, since there are only 341 chapters in the original. And the story is already finished, as on mtlnovel the story has already been translated and finished, your translation is exactly like there.

1yr

Krails710Lv4

Give credit to the true author.............

1yr

GodymandiasLv4

They used to cut the hands off Thieves...

1yr

Shaggy_BoombasticLv1

Crazy how people still other people's work and call it there's.......................... ................................................... .................................................. ................................................ .................................

1yr

pingpongddadsLv1

Such a shameless person, stealing others work and trying to make profit of it, you leech and you haven't even said that you are translating someone else story which is already translated and available in mtl for free. Still after taking so much money on patreon you don't have the basic decency to translate it properly, you just copied entire thing for mtl and claimed it to be yours. I don't think this guy has written anything in his life to know how bad plagiarisim is. Even if he wanted to post this story he should have given credit to the original author. I also have read mtl and his patreon chapters feels like he takes chapter from mtl and uses chat gpt to refine it.

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