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Chouzenfox
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2023-12-24 06:33

By default, I give 1 star for world development when it is the FF of a story with an already developed world since it is not a direct effort from the author. With that said, the story is very good and well developed, the writing is a little difficult to understand at first but in my opinion the story takes a hit after the MC gets the sacred gear annihilation maker, because he can only create specific monsters and Somehow these monsters have a useless backstory which makes the MC a kidnapper of lives from other worlds or someone with mental problems for trying to please, discuss and socialize with characters who are almost literally monstrous copies of his selective memories created by him. even with powers, memories and feelings chosen by him directly or indirectly. Worse, he almost completely ignores real people (from the Genshin world) so he can make friends and hang out with the monsters he created with this ability...

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First and foremost. Regarding the grammar issues and spelling mistakes. I'm sorry. Idk if my grammar is good or bad in your opinion. I'm not well-versed in English, so I just used the Grammarly as my assistant to write this novel. Some people have said it's decent already, so I'm relieved.Secondly, It's regarding the MC. He was an illustrator/artist, musician, and streamer in his past life. Even though he only knew a few anime, he actually knew a lot of the characters because he often made fanart based on subscriber requests on livestreams.And, since I said there was no Genshin Impact in his previous life, consider it as an AU Earth.Third, In this story, I tried to make the characters in Genshin have the same personality as the original lore as possible. And I apologize if some are a little different or a lot different from the original lore.The lore in this novel is the same as the original. But, I may make some mistakes due to misinformation and my forgetfulness. So I apologize in advance.The timeline of the story started a few months prior to The Rite of Descension in Liyue Harbor, which is probably earlier than when the Traveler arrived in the City of Mondstadt, at least the Traveler arrived in the city a month prior to the Rite of Descension or a little more based on my estimation when I played Genshin in v1.0.There will be lots of events (especially Archon quests) that don't follow the in-game storyline because of the presence of the MC, or some of them will be done by the MC rather than the Traveler.Next, the ocular power. I have several reasons for choosing it, but I won't give you guys an explanation since it's kinda a spoiler thingy. Just read and think for yourself!As for the MC's pic, I just downloaded the pic somewhere (I forgot) and then roughly edited it.

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