5 star for writing and genshin fanfic but -1 for butchering manga some manga fanservice is its plus point if he worry for that use age rating and genshin is more mature, many young ppl teen like Amy, barbara, amber all still teen and already working and killing. another -1 for both different character personality m8 as well say AU. and not only character personality, culture is AU as well genshin is semi middle age(monstad/inazuma) or maybe sumeru and fountain that kinda more advance but still not modern like here soo using modern culture is bad, like yaoyao, sometime asian children play naked in wild in old day soo when madam ping punish mc while she is most kind adeptus not only out of character punishing instead lecturing and punishing for something normal at that time is no no.
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the first point, you're right that teenagers in teyvat are mature, but that doesn't mean they're mature enough to read something rated 18.the second point, based on the lore, Madame Ping doted Yaoyao, while Yaoyao has a pure heart like Goku, so i made her give a punishment to him because she felt something like that wasn't appropriate for Yaoyao to see. moreover, i don't think Madame Ping is the most kind Adeptus, but she's more open minded than the other Adepti.
its good if the mc is polite but the way he acts like a beta is lame
UltimateSenpai:the first point, you're right that teenagers in teyvat are mature, but that doesn't mean they're mature enough to read something rated 18.the second point, based on the lore, Madame Ping doted Yaoyao, while Yaoyao has a pure heart like Goku, so i made her give a punishment to him because she felt something like that wasn't appropriate for Yaoyao to see. moreover, i don't think Madame Ping is the most kind Adeptus, but she's more open minded than the other Adepti.
